The Winter Coat Poem by Marilyn Jean

The Winter Coat

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Here, both wind and cold rain came without a surprise
Yet, the long, weird Summer ended only yesterday
Quite a boring story but it is time for my evening walk
No dog on a lead for me but my ever wandering mind
My tour is short, unchanged, call it routine
It feels dark around, yet I don't want to hurry
A few lighted rooms behind windows, yet everything sleeps
Wrapped in my old winter coat I go on my usual route
I could almost mistake what day or what year this is
This scares me a bit, one second, but I dive in denial
So much has changed since last winter, but my coat
Not surprising that comfort comes in this old warming friend
In the pockets, long-forgotten items seem to come to life
Finding once again my fingers as I walk around the streets
Or through my mind slowly, then I am home again till tomorrow

Wednesday, September 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L MILTON HANKINS 23 September 2020

Marilyn, this is a well-written piece of blank verse. I love the imagery and the subject. Who has never experienced finding an old piece of paper (or whatever!) in last year's winter coat. Kudos!

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