The White Angel Poem by Daniel Brick

The White Angel

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A response to a poem by Konstantin Balmont

The White Angel has lived for eons
in exile from Heaven, even from its grace
which flows in immense currents over creatures
and humans alike. The Higher Angels deemed it
prudent to add humiliation to his suffering.
'Every creature can overcome the suffering
allotted to him.' And so just before they beat
their immense wings and ascended in perfect flight.
they concluded, 'The White Angel will endure
this further suffering.' The White Angel expected
such turns of fate, he was not one to complain.
But he deemed it prudent to disguise his identity
on earth, lest another creature appeal to him
for spiritual help he could not deliver. And thus
the White Angel became a simple white bird, who
lived slightly apart from other birds, and perched
on branches high above humans, who rarely looked up.

The white bird blended into nature: all night he hid
in shadows that made his feathers lose their brilliance
and gradually the many colors that make up white
drained away, leaving behind a dull and dirty color
which words cannot name. But the white bird was
not born to be a creature of the night: night has no hold
over him. Was it not the quiet affirmation of his angelic
nature that the very earliest dawn-light was attracted
to him? Those first rays, not yet visible to animal eyes,
spread themselves evenly across his body and reclaimed him
as a Creature of Light. From where he perched so high,
on the slender top branches that swayed back and forth
in the slightest breeze, the white bird, perfect still,
blazed with a radiance that nature did not ignite. It was
the daily grace that flowed impartially at such heights,
and recognized in the white bird an inner glory its humble
shape enhanced. Even the Higher Angels descending quickly
with the morning light recognized in the white bird's
brightness their arrogant error. And in a flash of light,
composed equally of natural and supernatural energies,
the white bird was changed into the White Angel, and
he ascended unaccompanied to the summons of the Highest Heaven,
his suffering fulfilled, his radiance restored, his divine life
resumed, as dawnlight reflected his white beauty.

Tuesday, December 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: miracle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 08 December 2016

The first I read this - the impression was so great that I like was embracing you for 3 hours. I was doing my job but in soul - I embraced like the cloud of sparkling yellow light. I was afraid of this. then I wrote you an answer as I felt and as it came in my mind. I don't want to go deep in it. But decided to tell you this seeing that it is important to you.

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Bharati Nayak 06 December 2016

And in a flash of light, composed equally of natural and supernatural energies, the white bird was changed into the White Angel, and he ascended unaccompanied to the summons of the Highest Heaven, his suffering fulfilled, his radiance restored, his divine life resumed, as dawnlight reflected his white beauty. - - - - - -I believe in miracles and I love this poem of yours.

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Daniel Brick 06 December 2016

And miracle it is although the White Angel/white bird had to wait for eons for it to be fulfilled. I really enjoyed composing those lines you cited. They were NOT in my rough draft. They came to me as I was typing the poem at my PH site. That's either a happy coincidence or a small miracle!

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Simone Inez Harriman 06 December 2016

Fascinating write. I had to look up the meaning of the white angel. I learned that the white angel light ray represents the purity and harmony that come from holiness and is part of the metaphysical system of angel colors based on seven different light rays.White clothes and wings indicate purity, peace, blessings, and rejuvenation. We may be at peace with ourselves and our life. I just loved the overall feeling that your write imparted on me. To rise above adversity, to become true to oneself and allow your spirit to shine. Thank you Daniel.

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Daniel Brick 06 December 2016

You put my meaning in a wonderful nutshell: to rise above adversity, be true to oneself, to let your spirit shine. Thanks for articulating this theme. BTW Thanks for your research into angel colors: I did not know this but I'm glad to learn it. I used the the image Balmont gave me who probably did know these mystical things. My idea came from the spectrum of light Isaac Newton discovered in which white is NOT a separate color but the presence of all colors simultaneously. That's science, not mysticism, but it sounds like magic, doesn't it?

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