The Walk Poem by David Wood

The Walk

Rating: 5.0


I walk alone the evening streets
Past tired terraced houses stuck
Together like sardines in a tin
Tiled roofs with lonely chimneys

Pointing skywards like soldiers on
Guard duty. Dusk sees gulls going
Home after a hard days scrounging
Picking up leftovers from magpies

Sleepy houses with hidden contents
People living their lives behind 26
Inch TV screens just chewing gum
For the mind, such total banality

I used to walk with Clara my Labrador
Now retired and rests at home dreaming
Of parks beaches and other treats as
Nights cape begins casts its dull shadow

I walk up the hill around the corner
And past the pub where friends gather
To forget their day past the church now
Empty of hope and down the long hill

That great onion in the sky shines down
Mockingly shifting lazy tides causing
Them to bulge in obedience and casting
Shadows full of hidden intent as I walk

Home is but a heart beat away

Friday, December 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nightfall,walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2020

A well crafted opus.... Truly brilliant and splendid ......5 stars*****...Bernard

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David Wood 21 December 2020

Thank you Bernard for your comments.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2020

'That great onion in the sky shines down Mockingly shifting lazy tides causing Them to bulge in obedience and casting Shadows full of hidden intent'... Beautiful imagery of the nightfall. Thanks for sharing. Full rating

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Hannatu Adamu 18 December 2020

Well, I certainly enjoyed reading this, well-done!

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