The Tear Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The Tear

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A drop of tears
booked me in den of sad,
carried brook of soreness,
detained full my enjoyment,
entitled me endless echo of pathos,
fabricated all perky activeness,
gabbled all gratuity of past in bitterness,
hoarded fable of passions,
imbued me by ink of sorrow,
jabbed playful sinuous letter,
kept but keen fragrance of love,
lustful game was not there in us,
magnified your virginity in my manly chamber.

Nectarine the tear is- encloses us maidenly,
ornaments my eyes as handsome sight,
pacifies around my all in and out,
quests thirst of life in elixir,
rearranges milieu to stand together.
Soars the wings of tear like united pigeon
Technicolor life of drip makes us mature
Ubiquitous vision is love before us
Vale of happiness is in our union
Wail is waning for innocent smiling
X-rays of love is flourishing around
Year of years for you and me
zealous to show we are love in free

-June 04,2018 Chottagram, Bangladesh

The Tear
Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,love,sorrows,tears,union state
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2024

A poignant poem! Appreciated the way you have presented tears

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

I see a beautiful arrangement in your poem. You have written this poem astutely and alphabetically in an acrostic manner. A lovely poem with nice theme.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2018

If Akhtar ji says ur good ur good its like acrostic must make it a bit sexy more bees will fly ung one @32 ye?

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Akhtar Jawad 20 June 2018

It was not an easy job but you wrote wonderful poem arranging the lines in alphabetic order, still the poem never lost its beauty. Great work!

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