The Story Of A King: 02 - The Distant Beauty Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Story Of A King: 02 - The Distant Beauty

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Like the distant hill

Kings look blue.

Round, symmetric, shapy,

complete, ruff and tuff

revered and full of hue.


Through the windows of

transparent glamourous panes.

The king could see all-

none could see his mind

or heart, nor who else there reigns.


Royal was his robes,

as much loyal were His men,

nobody had a wish

none there had a complain

as if pleasure rained away pain.


The king was shaved fair,

clean and bright his looks.

Who can imagine things

improper, that the state He rules

fits for most beggars, in the Guineas Book?

The Story Of A King: 02 - The Distant Beauty
Tuesday, November 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: kingdom,lifestyle,beauty,people,royalty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A king of a state should have his own senses, eyes and ears to see and hear the sufferings of his fellow people. But rarely do they have it. And nobody understands the dire reality that a king lives with.The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 14 November 2017

Who can imagine things improper, that the state he rules fits for most beggars in the Guinese book.In every section of poetry your excellence is proved sir.Good one.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 November 2017

Thank you sir for the wise and kind remarks.

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Prativa Rani 15 November 2017

Like the distant hill Kings look blue. Round, symmetric, shapy, complete, ruff and tuff revered and full of hue. Yes the fake appearances of kings don't help. Nicly penned. 10++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 15 November 2017

The king was shaved fair, clean and bright his looks. Who can imagine things improper, that the state He rules fits for most beggars, in the Guineas Book? The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. Nicely penned. 10++++

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Suratha Kumar Rout 15 November 2017

Royal was his robes, as much loyal were His men, nobody had a wish none there a complain as if pleasure rained away pain. Lovely poem shared.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 20 January 2018

nsparent glamourous panes. The king could see all- none could see his mind or heart, nor whoelse there reigns. Sir great imagination your poem10+++++++

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Sabita Sahoo 15 November 2017

Royal was his robes, as much loyal were His men, nobody had a wish none there a complain as if pleasure rained away pain. Lovely poem shared 10++++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 15 November 2017

Who can imagine things improper, that the state He rules fits for most beggars, in the Guineas Book? The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. Nicely penned. 10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 15 November 2017

Like the distant hill Kings look blue. Round, symmetric, shapy, complete, ruff and tuff revered and full of hue. Yes the fake appearances of kings don't help. Nicly penned. 10++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 November 2017

The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. Like the distant hill Kings look blue. Round, symmetric, shapy, complete, ruff and tuff revered and full of hue. Yes the fake appearances of kings don't help. Nicly penned. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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