The Statue Maker Poem by S.D. TIWARI

The Statue Maker

Rating: 5.0


The death angels came to take a soul,
But the whole game appeared to be foul.
Thirteen alike persons standing in queue,
The real one they wanted, there’s no clue.

Angels confused, whose soul they’ll take;
‘God’ will never forgive, if they mistake.
In fact, the skilled and clever statue maker,
Could carve one’s sculpture, truly similar.

The carver was very confident of his art;
‘Why should not use it for me’, he thought.
He had made twelve statues alike to him,
Virtually, he put his soul, in making them.

Statues were so perfect, looked like alive;
Though breathless but none could realise.
When came to take his soul, angels of death;
He stood amongst those, stopping his breath.

Angels couldn’t identify him; returned in vain.
Reaching the god, full story they explained.
‘Single such person made, records ascertain’,
The angry ‘God’ told, and sent them again.

This time the angels came, a plan prepared;
Watching statues carefully, they murmured-
‘Wav! an excellent work, but done a mistake! ’
Listening such comment, he shook like quake

Stunned statue maker, immediately did react
And surprisingly yelled! , ‘where is the mistake? ’
Where the mistake was, angels understood,
Soul of the great carver, very easily they took.

- S.D.Tiwari

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 24 January 2016

'The Statue Maker' is indeed an amazing and extra-ordinary piece of poetry, both on the basis of imagery as well as narrative. Like a good detective novel, the mystery was solved in the concluding part. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks.

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David s.w Johnson 27 July 2011

Good work. lots of strong imagery.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice effective poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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