The Sound Of Life - 03 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Sound Of Life - 03

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The cry of the Earthworm

Dark sky, days after the heavy flood

Hunger, thirst, dries up blood.

Saturday, September 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: aftermath,cry,dearth,deaths,human condition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 29 October 2017

The cry of the Earthworm Dark sky, days after the heavy flood Hunger, thirst, dries up blood. A beautiful concept of drying blood of the earthworm representing the downtrodden and their suffering at the aftermath of flood. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 February 2018

Prativa, Thank you dear for this finest remarks. Many thanks for the kind visit to this page.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 October 2017

The cry of the Earthworm Dark sky, days after the heavy flood Hunger, thirst, dries up blood. A very nice write. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 February 2018

Seema, Thank you dear for this finest remarks. Many thanks for the kind visit to this page.

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Anita Aparajita Das 02 October 2017

The cry of the Earthworm Dark sky, days after the heavy flood Hunger, thirst, dries up blood. Great haiku. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 February 2018

Thanks Neetu, Thank you dear for this finest remarks. Many thanks for the kind visit to this page.

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D Priyanka Singh 02 October 2017

Nice haiku on the oppressed mute creature. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 February 2018

Thank you DP dear for this finest remarks. Many thanks for the kind visit to this page.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 October 2017

Dark sky, days after the heavy flood Hunger, thirst, dries up blood. The cry of the earthworm, a creature that can't speak of her distress. 10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 February 2018

Hey Sanjukta, Thank you dear for this finest remarks. Many thanks for the kind visit to this page.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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