The Return Of Peace - Inspired By Peace By Yoonoos Peerbocus Poem by Richard Wlodarski
The Return Of Peace - Inspired By Peace By Yoonoos Peerbocus
Peace will come
When Mankind
Is so dead
This is beautiful and true, but Robert...actually human without selfishness and greediness, is a great creature to help world to improve, but sadly....we get tempted with wealthiness of this life, and we sacrifice peace for temporary smiles..wonderful write Richard, i love how you can make it simple while still meaningful and nice. Yoonoos must be proud to know this piece emerged as it got inspired from him :) keep it up
So tragic that so much selfishness and greediness still exists to this day. Soul, I'm getting better with the succinct poems. Thank you for your kind words.
Concise and touching. Meaningful as dear Rajnish ji has inscribed in his comment. Thanks for sharing.
Extremely painful denouement. This shows the inadequacy of human effort and its abject surrender resulting into the peace of a graveyard. Thanks.
So tragic! When will we ever learn? Rajnish, as always, thank you so much for your insightful feedback.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A great short work on peace....worthy of profuse admiration. Top score and to my favorite.
Dillip, I am honoured and humbled by such praise. Sincere thx for such a positive response and for adding my poem to your favourites.