The Pen Is Searching, Rhyming, Internal Or End-Rhyming.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

The Pen Is Searching, Rhyming, Internal Or End-Rhyming....

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The pen is searching,
rhyming, internal or end-rhyming....

i am but a human being, no magician nor politician,

now I am submitting,
the song that I daily sing,

the results of the
the pen that can launch a thousand faces
and creates mesmerizing phrases,
in tennis you get countless aces,

in poetry our poems will become immortal over the ages...

one thing we can't change,
is the ever-increasing corruption,
such as the constant of a volcano
erruption,

but of all these things,
believe it or not,
there is only one God,
that remains perpetually,
is ultimately His Love above….

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 9 March 2020

Monday, March 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,immortality,love,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
but of all these things,
believe it or not,
there is only one God,
that remains perpetually,
is ultimately His Love above….

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 9 March 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 10 March 2020

This is fantastic. Love to read.anjandev roy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2020

Thank you so much, Anjandev. Thank you for your precious response and visit.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 March 2020

Yes, the pen is always searching....searching for great themes to write, searching that rhyme that tingle the mind.....searching that magic words, beautiful words that will make poetry immortal. Yet, with God, search for perpetual love is over for His love is great , eternal and encompassing. Beautifully crafted write.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2020

5) do mean very much to me and it makes me truly happy. I wish you enjoy your day, see the beauty around you, dear great poetess.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2020

4) I thank the Lord that He gave me you. Please, have no fear of my words, I tell you that because I know about that and since I believe in Him, so I tell you in my honest way, of course no fear nor problems, you are truly beautiful in heart and soul and as I oftentimes told you you have a beautiful mind. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Your support

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2020

3) The paper has run out of space so quickest always, here on Poem Hunter. Yes, I have dried my tears now, but am still touched very much by your presence of those loveliest words. I regard them loveliest, that I tell you time and again. Thank you for your loveliest strong words to give me great support. Dear Mrs. Juan Austin, I love you as you are, a great poetess, supporting ardently others

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 March 2020

What a unique thought that the great Poetess had conveyed in this marvelous poem. How amazing to read different thoughts from one mind and end up with with glorifying the Lord Almighty. Sylvia's pen always find that flow where she can convey the great message of God and that is the Love of God to humanity.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2020

2) all here right now in my dutch morning. Your responses are one by one prose-poems themselves. Written with such a caring, with such love for the written words, you know me, I can go on and on like I have nothing to do anymore only responding to your loveliest responses here. I always get the most beautiful and caring comments and compliments, they're very special to me.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2020

Your fabulous response, your precious comment and your valuable compliments make my tears flow fluently because of the great joy and being touched very much having read your words that is like a loveliest prose poem itself. You are such an ardent Mrs. Juan Austin, through and through a passionate poetess, constantly greatest in mind and in being. Your loving and caring words say it

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 March 2020

The pen is searching, rhyming, internal or end-rhyming.... i am but a human being, no magician nor politician, now I am submitting, the song that I daily sing, This is the real experience of every poet in day to day life. wonderful. tony

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