The One That Lights My World Up Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

The One That Lights My World Up

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You're the one that lights my world up,
During the dark days of my life;
Taking me out of oblivion,
Away from fret, away from strife.

You're the one that rescues my soul
From the clutches of hurt and pain;
Saving me from the agony,
Letting me rise up once again.

You're the one that makes my heart glow,
Like the bright stars up in the sky;
Letting me feel the love inside,
The level of your care is high.

You're the one that turns the rain
Into beauty of the sunshine;
Allowing me to brave the storm,
Making the cold vile weather fine.

You're the one that opens my eyes,
To see the truth, watching lies stop;
The guide that shows me the right way
Is the one that lights my world up.

The One That Lights My World Up
Wednesday, September 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 03 December 2020

I am sure the 'You' referred here is God the Almighty! He is the one who lights up darkened paths, creates the inner glow in us, gives courage to brave the storms and guiding us through all adversities of life! One who realizes this will be blessed by Him! A beautifully rhyming devotional write! Top marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2019

Another excellent write from the pen of a great Poet. Very inspiring. Beautifully penned.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2019

Thank you so much, dear ate Rose. Your comment is overwhelming and humbling🙏❤️😊

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 September 2019

You're the one that turns the rain Into beauty of the sunshine; Allowing me to brave the storm, Making the cold vile weather fine.......// it's the poem on YOU; this " YOU" is the love; beautiful poem penned; like it; enjoyed

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2019

Thanks, Mahtab. Your fabulous feedback is well appreciated 🙏👌😊

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Lamar Cole 18 September 2019

Great heartfelt poem about the one that lights my world up.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2019

Thanks, sir Lamar. Your kind words are always treasured🙏👌😊

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