The Life: A Fragment Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

The Life: A Fragment

Rating: 4.7


since life is a journey of constant steps;
Darkness to colours, and to light,
Every one steps into the seven hues;
Embryo, infadolescent, youth, lover of life,
Turning man, father, turned gold, the old,
RASA of all colours, and the last, all sold.
But youth never ends for a lover of life,

Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: youth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A comment on a poem of Sir, The Poet Poet.
Infadolescent= infant+adolescence.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 18 August 2019

Beautiful stage. What beautiful journey. 😍😍😍🙌🙌🙌Last line is touching.

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Thanks for appreciating my effort. I remember I had read your some of poems. You have a deep love for Sikhism. I would like to read more of your works. Thank you dear poetess!

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 August 2019

A nice philosophical drop. Loved it and thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 August 2019

A well crafted poem, Jagdish...10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 12 April 2020

A nice comment on a lovely poem.

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Rajnish Manga 18 January 2020

The philosophy of life's journey through different stages explained quite beautifully. A youthful heart stays young through this journey. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2019

NICE BUT U HAVE NOT READ MY POEMS INSPIRED BY YOU READ MY ROOTS POEM NOW WILL U U HAVE TAKEN A LONG TYME TO COME

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Bharati Nayak 09 September 2019

Yes, life is a mixture of different colours - -a great poem, thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 September 2019

A wonderful and insightful poem. The closure line expresses all.

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