The Impact Of Love…! Poem by Devanshu Patel

The Impact Of Love…!

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The impact of love…

Truly I find me, flying in the sky...!
Poor birds! Seem forgotten to fly…!
The joy I feel, does know no bound;
Boasting not, though it may sound!
Have you ever seen the fishes flying?
Out of joy, the silence, crying?
The sky so happy, blooming flowers?
Fruits and candies falling like showers?
The hills, having melted, flowing like river?
Out of fear, the dark, feeling quiver?
The pain, so happy, delivering smiles?
The miseries of all kind facing exiles?
Am I dreaming? Or is this a fact?
Only the love can make this Impact..!

©Devanshu Patel
Chicago
11/02/2018

The Impact Of Love…!
Friday, November 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True and deep love for someone has the power to change this world. Actually it is not the world that gets changed but our outlook, perspectives, our views or attitudes to others definitely get changed. Here 'LOVE' does not mean the mere bodily attraction of a boy for a girl...or of a man to a woman...! but Love in its perfect meaning where body or appearance does not matter. Here this poem is written for a person who is almost unknown….
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2018

Actually it is not the world that gets changed but our outlook, perspectives, our views or attitudes to others definitely get changed. from your poet's notes...... so true dear poet... Have you ever seen the fishes flying? Out of joy, the silence, crying. your meditations lead us the readers to a world of contrasts making us think to make our own philosophy of love and life in the context of ur poem...........thank u dear Devanshu.. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 03 November 2018

awesome poetry with beautiful lines....really loved it...thanks for sharing

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Devanshu Patel

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Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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