The Girl With A Broken Heart Poem by Aufie Zophy

The Girl With A Broken Heart

Rating: 3.7


A heart filled with pain, deceived by lies.
Feelings bitter and hard; hatred burning.
A flood of tears, giving her all red eyes.
Will the tide ever be turning?

Even though her heart, he has been destroying,
life seems so nice to him, he is still enjoying.
She is alone, all alone with a heart full of hurt.
She shouts it out loud, but remains unheard.

Lust for revenge, she finds in her heart;
making suffering and pain to be worse.
She wants peace, but where does she start;
all she feels, is hatred. It feels like a curse.

Then she prays for help and support from above,
for her lonely heart that seems to have lost all love.
Soon, the idea of forgiving seems to grow stronger.
She does not want to hate for much longer

Once she manages to forgive in her heart,
grief seems suddenly to start falling apart.
Tears may come back on and off,
but she becomes able to live, love and laugh

Truly the cure for a broken heart
begins when the forgiveness will start.
Whoever decides to keep hatred so strong
will continue to hurt and be bitter all along.

Hatred is like venom that prohibits one to live;
the antidote is to find it in our heart to forgive

Wednesday, May 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,forgiveness,hatred,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(this is an improved version of a poem, I wrote and posted before.)

Forgiveness is not easy. It doesn't mean we love again the nasty person who hurt us. It just means we stop allowing that nasty person to have any effect on our life. By forgiving, we allow the beauty that is all around in our life again

A few nice essays on forgiving can be found by visiting the blog, soul sprinkles (just search for 'soul sprinkles' in google)and then search in the blog for forgiveness.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 05 June 2019

Truly the cure for a broken heart begins when the forgiveness will start. Whoever decides to keep hatred so strong will continue to hurt and be bitter all along.... Beautiful, well said. Really hatred is like venom.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 May 2019

A well crafted poem, sir Aufie.......10+++++++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 May 2019

great poem, excellent connotation like to quote last couplet- Hatred is like venom that prohibits one to live; the antidote is to find it in our heart to forgive

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