The Fiction Of Life Poem by Kevin Patrick

The Fiction Of Life

Rating: 5.0


The past is only memory
and the future a fatal mystery.
The present is the only gift
That offers our existence peace



For existence is a fantasy
We dreamt our selves to being
and Life is just a fiction
that death will complete

Wednesday, May 10, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: thought,existentialism,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 May 2023

We should embrace what present offers to us because we have already lost the past and future is unseen and unpredictable....an excellent poem.

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Anjandev Roy 11 May 2023

Absolutely perfect......thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 May 2023

Wonderful I enjoyed this one very much

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

The present is the only gift that offers our existence peace....you are absolutely correct. I am so happy to find this poem among top selected member poems. Many congratulations! !

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M. Asim Nehal 11 May 2023

Fabulous poem. I agree with Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 May 2023

Wow! I really LOVE this poem, Kevin! The 1st stanza alone is a gift to the reader. And just when you think that it can't get any better...along comes the 2nd stanza. There is nothing but ALIVENESS in both!

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Kevin Familia 11 May 2023

Very deep, that I ponder it in amazement, I like it! It's wonderful!

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David Wood 11 May 2023

We are all heading down the same path, and same ending. Great poem on life.

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