The End Of Days Poem by Susan Williams

The End Of Days

Rating: 5.0


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Through the picture window in my home,
I watched spring budding and greening my world
Day by day, rain by wind, dark cloud by blue sky
While I listened to the end of days coming.
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Through the picture window in my living room,
I watched a small but lively flock of birds
Hopping around from branch to branch to branch
While I listened to the end of days coming.
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Through the picture window in my heart
I watched them joyfully playing a variation
of Simon Says and Follow the Leader.
While I listened to the end of days coming
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Through the picture window in my soul,
I watched them looking quite merry out there
I think they were happy to see the snow gone
While I listened to the end of days coming.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~©2018 Susan Williams

Tuesday, May 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2018

I watched a small but lively flock of birds Hopping around from branch to branch to branch While I listened to the end of days coming....watching the beauties of nature and meditating on the end of the days. you are philosophical and spiritual........ nature is always a nourishing factor for a poet and a poetess. tony

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Susan Williams 18 May 2018

We live in the heart of nature and sometimes she holds our life in the palms of her hands. We use her for similes and metaphors and images and lessons for our writings. She is a good source material as she should be given who created her and all the life forms on earth! Thank you for your supportive comment. God bless you

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tom billsborough 16 May 2018

The antics of the sparrows and the singing of the merles really do give you that uplifting feeling. Far better than a bra! There is always a shadow in the end of days but it appears less threatening when we watch the sparrows playing follow my leader. A fine poem with a really good rhythm which matches the mixed mood.

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Kingsley Egbukole 06 October 2023

Surely the signs are there for the impending end. Beautifully crafted

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2023

Seems that the poetess has mentally prepared to meet the end but she takes pleasure in listening to the poetry of earth. A fantastic poem. Top score.

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Susan Williams 04 October 2020

Well, I am very glad you enjoyed it, Anjandev

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Anjandev Roy 01 October 2020

Such a wonderful piece.........thank u......anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 04 October 2020

I am glad you enjoyed it, Anjandev

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2019

The end of days is truly fast approaching.....10+++

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Susan Williams 05 December 2019

Thank you very much for the 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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