The Deep Six Poem by Michael Walkerjohn

The Deep Six

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Common Sense

salience makes sense
inevitability
sans all the nonsense


That Truth

functionally held
in living's truths hold on self
divine love persists


Applicability


becoming human
an unconditional whole
self-transcendence known


Personality


Surrounded by quiet
principles of peacefulness
are contemplative


Gradations of Severity


Every common thread
is that self-transcendent key
each is aware of


Becoming Superhuman


Imagination
the way of extreme thinking
suggests, inclusion

Saturday, March 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,contemplation,futuristic,imagination,love and life,nonsense
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2016

Imagination the way of extreme thinking suggests, inclusion....what an amazing piece of work is shared here with vivid imagery. Wisely penned.10

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Michael Walkerjohn 19 March 2016

Aloha Kumarmani... Many gracious thanks My Brother... IAM happy that you have visited and have shared in this write... through your vivid comments... I compose these senryu and post them as a theme... It is a way to limit my hoof print in the www In a way, this 'common sense', when practiced daily, does lead to one becoming Superhuman... would you not agree? All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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