The Death Of Paris Poem by Barry Middleton

The Death Of Paris

Rating: 4.7


Because he coveted beauty
above wisdom or power,
death would be his destiny.
Wisdom may have saved him.
Yet he deceived himself
to believe a mortal man,
could possess such loveliness,
even though he was a prince.
The fairest maiden of all,
the daughter of the Swan,
was wed to a Greek King,
but she did not love him.
Still in alliances of death,
armies swore protection
of their honored Queen,
and the honor of the King.
Yet goddesses conspired,
and Eros fired love's arrow
ensuring Helen's passion.
Thus the Prince was doomed.
Paris would die for love,
for abduction of the Queen
brought war and retribution,
and Troy was razed to dust.

The Death Of Paris
Sunday, June 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 17 June 2016

An epic retold in a very short, condensed way. This is quite a feat. Congrats.10

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Barry Middleton 17 June 2016

Thanks Nosheen. I did leave out a lot of detail.

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Annette Aitken 13 June 2016

A great story told with beautiful imaginary as reading along, it unfolds with every word one as important as the other, nicely penned.

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Barry Middleton 13 June 2016

Thank you Annette, I appreciate your kind remark.

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Dimitrios Galanis 13 June 2016

to believe a mortal man, could possess such loveliness, even though he was a prince//=to believe [that] a [mere, common]mortal man /could possess such loveliness, / ignoring that princes are mortals too. {! }

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Barry Middleton 13 June 2016

Thanks for the suggestions. Ill take a second look.

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 June 2016

You moved through my fields once again as few could manage it,dear Barry.The hybris of the mortal to attempt what should not was painted marvellously.

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Barry Middleton 13 June 2016

The story of Paris and Helen is one of the greatest plot lines of all time in my opinion. Here it is greatly condensed.

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2016

I chose silliness over all three. : -) An apt telling of the tale, Barry. A 10

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Barry Middleton 12 June 2016

I gave up the other three but I am still working on stillness as a fourth alternative but some days I do favor silliness. Thanks for the read, the comment, and the rating.

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