The Beach Poem by Lyn Paul
The Beach
The Beach was waiting for me today
My fears were gone and it was time to stay
To feel the sand between mytoes
To feel how hard the sea breeze blows
The waves were wild, they were calling me
The sand was blowing, I could hardly see
My heart was beating all so loud
Then the sunshone through the cloud
I knew then I was moving on
And all my pain was finally gone
I closed my eyes for a second or two...
Just cherishing our love that will always be true
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
Like Khairul, I too wonder how the notes relate to the poem! The sea with its undulating waves and its sprawling beach with the wind have quelled all your heart aches and you are getting filled with positive hopes of an enduring relationship.....! . This is what I gather from this poem! The setting is beautiful!
I too love the beaches in summer. A feeling of true happiness. M. Walker.
It was time to stay! And to respect nature. Thanks for sharing.
I feel That I should be living near a beach.....maybe that was in my other life.....we live about an an hour froma beach...love visiting it... Anette
Hauntingly beautiful transition from being released from the pain of an illness to giving a person's soul back to nature and their realisation that cherished memories are eternal! Stunning write Lyn!
Beautiful rendition of words in pleasant train of thought, elegantly brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Lyn. Always remain blessed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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'I closed my eyes for a second or two... Just cherishing our love that will always be true' Beautiful indeed. But I couldn't really see how the note relates to the poem.