The Ambiguity Of Relationships Poem by devon da poet

The Ambiguity Of Relationships

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The smiling of the sun assures another dawn.
The outpour of rain signifies life.
The spring season gives rise to new flowers.
The winter, white snow define solitude and silence.

An everlasting moment is seldom, though good memories last.
Like necklace and pendants we hope to stay attached.
Birds of same feather flock together but deviate in peril;
Love at first sight, hearts quarrel.

A light is seen in dark places;
Though the dark can't be seen in the light.
Many dogs drop their bones and leap toward their shadow's.
Many princes won't kiss their frogs to find their true tomorrows.
Lilies found near waterfalls are a lot more beautiful than those found near mere cliffs,
But roses with thorns are filled with griefs.

Listen to her plea, can't you not hear her?
She's the coconut trees swaying as the ocean recedes.
The mists in her eyes create a perplexity.
All she exhibits is more or less intricacy.

Look at his physique!
He's a valley compressed between two mountains.
His unconscious nature has been thrust,
Seemingly focused in his lust.

Dining tables, gifts and gestures,
Signing check books, giving lectures,
Attire, perfume, make-up, jewelry,
Charity to the Salvation Army,
Hours, weeks, months and years all end in despair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2013

The ambiguities nicely portrayed. A light is seen in dark places; Though the dark can’t be seen in the light. Yes, yes!

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Amanda John 12 June 2013

Well done bro....... love u loads. keep it up.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 June 2013

Charity to the salvation army, good write, thanks. i invite you to read my poems and comment.

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