let time preserve us
in memorials and tombs
as memory dust ~
will speak about our valor:
how we resisted the storm
This touching, lovely poem is in my Favorites. Wonderful writing!
Settling of memories with time is a great phrase, I liked the way you drafted it.
Memories- precious. Nice Tanka having a beautiful structure
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Life is not so easy and smooth...how we cross over the obstacles is what matters a lot...nice write...liked