Tajmahal Poem by Prabir Gayen

Tajmahal

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Tajmahal
(My Cleopatra)

Citadel of love is empty,
It needs light to vein circulate,
The Sun and the Moon nourish it,
Where is Love The Tajmahal upholds?
The Ode of Love is rare to find.

Without blood or the flow of life,
Taj is an empty shell, graveyard,
With light and shade it is unique,
Having mystery of life and death.

You are real Taj the Moon of Light,
Your eyes and smile surpass the Taj,
Your face is mystic with delight,
A poet must be truant to tell.

Tajmahal with light is joyous,
And in darkness It mystifies,
It is a symbol of love -hate,
You are pure light without malice.

A Living Taj is Standing Bright,
Your beauty glows with suppressed Joy,
Filling empty vault with your sun,
A real Taj of Love before Stone.
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@ prabir Gayen - 13/02/2019: 11: 20 AM.

Tajmahal
Wednesday, February 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 13 February 2019

The poem talks eloquently about two different Taj Mahals- one petrified and one living. What one finds missing in the former can very much find in the latter i.e. in the Living Taj Mahal which truly deserves the following epithets: A Living Taj is Standing Bright Your beauty glows with suppressed Joy

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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Very beautiful analysis....thanks

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M Asim Nehal 13 February 2019

A fantastic poem, comparing your love with the immortal Taj. Tajmahal with light is joyous, And in darkness It mystifies, It is a symbol of love -hate, You are pure light without malice.

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Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Very thanks dear friend.....

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

Very thanks poet...keep visiting my page

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Spandan Mondal 29 August 2020

Tajmahal with light is joyous, And in darkness It mystifies, It is a symbol of love -hate, You are pure light without malice...! !

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Spandan Mondal 29 August 2020

You are real Taj the Moon of Light, Your eyes and smile surpass the Taj, Your face is mystic with delight, A poet must be truant to tell...! ! !

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Spandan Mondal 29 August 2020

Citadel of love is empty, It needs light to vein circulate, The Sun and the Moon nourish it, Where is Love The Tajmahal upholds? The Ode of Love is rare to find.....! ! !

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Rudra Mondal 28 August 2020

A Living Taj is Standing Bright, Your beauty glows with suppressed Joy, Filling empty vault with your sun, A real Taj of Love before Stone..!

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Rudra Mondal 28 August 2020

Tajmahal with light is joyous, And in darkness It mystifies, It is a symbol of love -hate, You are pure light without malice.

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