Sunbeam Poem by Matloob Bokhari

SUNBEAM
I was sitting on a rock in a valley of flowers.
Intoxicating fragrance of flora was in the air.
Birds perched on trees were singing so lovely.
Stream flowing was speaking softly so sweet.
Morning dews on leaves were sparkling like gems.
Flowers were swaying to the whistling of breeze.
All of a sudden, saw a maiden half awake, half asleep,
Her beauty exalted the loveliness of vale flowers.
Behind the clouds a sunbeam crept
And wrapped valley with the wings of gold.
Addressing to all these gifts of God,
Sunbeams asked to teach the best creation of God:
'I am sending heavenly rays on the earth for joy.
Please don't send with nuclear shells
Faces smiling in cradles to graves.'

COMMENTS: SUNBEAM
Roselyn Sogano: Awesome poet, ..

Χρύσα Βελησσαρίου: You are the kind one Matloob, a real and always romantic poet. So smile! We love you!

Heather Burns: sounds like you saw a fairy lady. Lovely scene.

Laura Bailey: A write that is Heaven sent!

Ketsy Rivera: I am sending heavenly rays on earth for joy - Please don't send with nuclear shells - Smiling faces in the cradles to the graves....Great, metaphoric form of expression Mat

Ketsy Rivera: So deep, heart-felt verse Matloob

SatyenderParkashAas: real happiness only in natural ways of living, beautiful personification of nature and its traits.

Tribhawan Kaul: Nice write. Imagine the condition with out these heavenly sunbeams

Ann Carruth Donoghue: A heartfelt plea, great ink matloob x

Alma Delacruz Gossman: As I may have said elsewhere, this such a beautiful scene...with such beauty, I sense that you are one with such sweet and genuinely giving soul...you write with such reverence...and Sunbeams are the natural light that bring life to our souls...deeply...what a wonderful poem...

Shahzia Batool: insightful, thoughtful...so allegorical for what's going on in life here...

Michele Vizzotti-White: sounds like a perfect dream

Laura Grillo Laveglia: Very nice! ! ! You put me in a beautiful place when I read this. I could see, hear and smell! ! ! Excellent! !

Karyn Walker: Thanks for such a beautiful description of love.

Marilyn Ann Francis: SWEET Black heart (cards) JUST LIKE U MATLOOB, MAF

Kevin M. Hibshman: you paint a beautiful and inspiring word-picture! ! ! love it!

Eleni Mel: The poem has beautiful imagery but also tension in the latter half. A poem both to gladden and to instruct.

Emma Jane: A beautiful picturesque scene painted upon the canvas of the mind! Unfolding images. Transcendental smells. Love in full bloom. Intoxicating words to really feel the intensity of. I like!

Alma Delacruz Gossman: Conveyed with absolute love...such beauty you created here...we must pray for all to love in this way...no fear, no war, and certainly more focused on the love that is truly the answer...well done here dear Matloob Bokhari...Black heart (cards) 0; -)

Kristy Raines: Very Beautiful, Matloob. Such a wonderful statement at the end..I love to read your poetry.

Adrian Cooper: Wonderfull Matloob. Invokes the senses and feelings Beautifully. Lots of Love Black heart (cards)

Farzana Altaf: Super as always!

Alma Delacruz Gossman: Conveyed with absolute love...such beauty you created here...we must pray for all to love in this way...no fear, no war, and certainly more focused on the love that is truly the answer...well done here dear Matloob Bokhari...Black heart (cards) 0; -)

Frances Anna Ayers: Exceptional poem.Asalways, the nature imagery makes your work come alive

Shareef Abdur-Rasheed: Beautiful piece 'I am sending heavenly rays on earth for joy, please don't send with nuclear shells' Very creative expression and 'Food for thought'!

Angela Davis: So soothing and entrancing, Matloob!

Carole Semeniuk: my forever friend Matloob BokhariTHANKing and loving you always for your precious works.......... my apologies for not responding earlier............. its been a very hectic schedule these past few weeks.. am truly BLESSED to be on your friendsLIST........... much LOVE to you and yours ~! ~ Black heart (cards) Black heart (cards)

EmMeilė Matloob: Your poem creates stunningly beautiful imagery!




Adrian Cooper: Wonderfull Matloob. Invokes the senses and feelings Beautifully. Lots of Love
Alma Delacruz Gossman: Conveyed with absolute love...such beauty you created here...we must pray for all to love in this way...no fear, no war, and certainly more focused on the love that is truly the answer...well done here dear Matloob Bokhari...♥ 0; -)
Frances Anna Ayers: Exceptional poem.Asalways, the nature imagery makes your work come alive
Shareef Abdur-Rasheed: Beautiful piece 'I am sending heavenly rays on earth for joy, please don't send with nuclear shells' Very creative expression and 'Food for thought'!
Kristy Raines: Thank You, Matloob. You are also a good friend to me.
Kristy Raines: You are truly a very kind man.
CornischaVdb: thanks, , well written!
Sanjay Jha: nice poem! ! ! ....
SatyenderAas: Thanks for posting this very beautiful poem Matloob Bokhari'
Laura Grillo Laveglia: i received such beautiful images. Please dont ruin my image of heaven with war!