Sun Poisoning Poem by Axley Jade Blaze

Sun Poisoning

Rating: 5.0


She was only ever all flame, fire
He was her red-phosphorus MATCH
In this August opera.


(c)copyright 2018Sun Poisoning*Nicole D'Settemi

Sun Poisoning
Sunday, August 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion,relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Author's Annotation(s) : While slated 'haiku' the poem does not abide to the 5-7-5 syllable structure, as it was originally designed as an opener to NARCOTARY: Chemical Warfare (a literary fictional memoir) , before being released with any|all additional poetry collections.

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The American Haiku is not exactly the Japanese
Haiku. The Japanese Haiku is strictly disciplined
to seventeen syllables but since the language
structure is different I don't think American
Haiku's (short three-line poems intended to be
completely packed with Void of Whole)should worry
about syllables because American speech is
something again...bursting to pop.

Above all, a Haiku must be very simple and free
of all poetic trickery and make a little picture
and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi
Pastorella.

Jack Kerouac
Author
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 06 August 2018

Such a fine haiku, Nicole👍👍👍

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