Sun Day Poem by Susan Lacovara

Sun Day

Rating: 5.0


Powder blue

The day opens

Like a carnival gate barker

Calling and drawing me in

To the colors

The moving parts

The melody of leaves

Falling from branches

Lemon ice yellow sun

sweetly chilled breezing by

And high

Gourmet morning to fill my belly

A skipping stroll about the grounds

A song to keep me grounded

I will dress in pretty pastel liquid green

As if dripping from an artist's pallet

And spread the strokes of my smile wide

To paint my canvas

Fit for framing

Later hang to admire

SUN DAY

Sunday, October 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sunshine
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10/05/14. Appreciation for a lovely day, my own, to do as I so please. In PEACE.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 09 October 2014

Your SUN DAY is not a day of rest unless you consider so much excitement, movement, interaction restful. No, your special day is a day that is active, super-active. You put yourself in carnival atmosphere but it's really a stage for YOU, a performance the poem records. I think the spirit of this day you call yours is displayed by the way the poem doesn't have an ending - no destination is reached, the carnival doesn't shut down, no one shows up and cries, Susan, it's over now! Come home.The poem just stops, but the spirit it celebrates is on-going..Because that spirit is in you.

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Anthony Burkett 05 October 2014

I can see you smile... :)

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 October 2014

Powder blue that day opens, beautifully penned the poem.

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Chuy Amante 05 October 2014

That was visually tasty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A+

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