Stop Poem by Neela Nath Das

Stop

Rating: 4.8


S ilence need to kill noise soon.
T riviality is no god-gifted boon.
O ppression must be put to an end.
P atience can't be Torture's friend.

Friday, September 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 05 September 2014

short and beautiful and heart touching, thanks, Neela.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 September 2014

How beautifully your imagination has given a meaning to the word STOP, I haven't seen you but your high thinking has made me thinking about your lie that should be simple and a model of moral the humanity needs.

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Sandra Feldman 05 September 2014

As clever as it is deep, If followed, so many less, Would have to weep. How you really draw attention to Stop by creating an Acrostic is as original as it is amazing, very impressed! Good job, Neela. Loved it.

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Amitava Sur 05 September 2014

A brilliant acrostic with a lovely message! ! ! Loved it

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Chuy Amante 11 September 2014

Great Oration! ................

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Mohammad Skati 10 September 2014

The truth of life as declared by poetess Neela.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

Wow.... wonderful write Neela. STOP defined in a beautiful way. Loved it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 September 2014

Really beautiful STOP on crossing initially thought..but should be put no harm in it.. lovely we must stop doing wrong lovely

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Valsa George 05 September 2014

A beautiful and profound acrostic! Enjoyed!

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