Sorrowful Ocean Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sorrowful Ocean

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Life is like vast ocean,
Full of sorrow and pain,
Joy less and worry main,
Not to loose hope and energy regain,

To Learn a lesson from each failure,
Content with less and nothing to procure,
Difficulties more but patience to endure,
No immediate result but success is sure,

If life was ever to be smooth,
Who would pray and take oath?
Eat more and carry the weight
Sound sleep and get up late

Life and death are two parts of wheel
failure of any one may makes us to feel
Life may move on and doesn’t come to an end
Pray for success and ways to mend

who understands life but never lament?
No regrets but passing the comment
trying very hard to overcome the shock
Time never stops as clicks the time in clock

Hardship may give you endurance and strength
Will power to withstand and go to any length
No loss of face but to feel at ease,
Success to knock and failure to cease

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pittle Shaileja 27 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, Full of sorrow and pain, Joy less and worry remain, Not to loose strength but regain, vast and deep sorrowful occean...10

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Ritul Soni 30 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, Full of sorrow and pain, life has many angles...10

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Ratna Patel 02 August 2009

Life is vast like ocean, it is vast and deep...10

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Ketan Rajgor 02 August 2009

Life is vast like ocean, it is so vast and deep...10

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Sonu Dhanraj 10 August 2009

life is termed like that...10

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Ernest Makuakua 05 February 2016

who understands life but never lament? No regrets but passing the comment trying very hard to overcome the shock Time never stops as clicks the time in clock powerful poem there my friend with a lot to learn beautiful

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Kunwar Patel 24 October 2009

Learning a lesson from each failure, Content with less and not more procure, Difficulties more but will to endure, If no immediate result but success sure,

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Louis Rams 19 September 2009

the last stanze says it all to me when success knocks and failures ceases. good write

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Suresh Vakil 19 August 2009

lie is indeed sorrowful....10

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Kant Shri 16 August 2009

u should know how to swim it....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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