Songs Of My Heart - 04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Songs Of My Heart - 04

Rating: 5.0


The song of the skylark

sounded so sweet

tonight, as the moon

appeared at the zenith

with its silver smile

reflected bright

on the lips

of the lily below.


Songs of heart

are always sweet

when a heart

has a blue wound

under the shade

of some sweet past

while the soul was often

haunted by a soul

supposed to be

the mate,

but was separated

by cruel fate.

Tuesday, February 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heart song,seasons,songs of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 27 February 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. Wow, so great rhyming, such a pleasant poem.

7 0 Reply
Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks dear Rani for these nice words of encouragement.

0 0
Prativa Rani 27 February 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. Wow, so great rhyming, such a pleasant poem. 10+++++++++++++

7 0 Reply
Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks Rani dear for these nice words of encouragement.

0 0
Rini Shibu 27 February 2018

A lovely song of heart of sweet past but with a blue wound, love is painful

7 0 Reply
Rajendra Rout 07 May 2018

when a heart has a blue wound under the shade of some sweet past while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. Lovely poem. I enjoy this poem

1 0 Reply
Prativa Rani 05 March 2018

A beautiful song of the heart, the heart that has a blue wound. Nicely crafted Rani. 10+++++++

2 0 Reply
Prativa Rani 05 March 2018

A beautiful song of the heart, the heart that has a blue wound. Nicely crafted Rani.

2 0 Reply
Sanjukta Sahoo 02 March 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. A really sweet song of heart, delivering so delicate feelings. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++

4 0 Reply
Sanjukta Sahoo 02 March 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. A really sweet song of heart, delivering so delicate feelings. Thanks for the sharing.

4 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
Close
Error Success