Something Sweeter Than Honey Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Something Sweeter Than Honey

Rating: 4.9


Colors of your image,
aroma of your petals,
taste of the honey,
I can only imagine
what a honey bee gets
when it touches your style!
Pink roses!
when my soul will be separated
from my mortal body,
I promise to be a honey bee,
I'm determined to touch your style,
I am firm in love to suck the nectar
in its original form.
What of honey!
If I am changed in a honey bee
I shall come to you with a heart more catalytic,
than that of a bee.
I am trained in love by a beautiful Eve!
I don't want to hurt you
but the Eve is more colorful, aromatic and delicate.
Just to change the taste,
I wish to be a honey bee.
I am sure in love
I can reproduce something sweeter than honey.

Something Sweeter Than Honey
Saturday, May 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: man
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 18 May 2018

To wake up to read a beautiful poem like this one is definitely sweeter than honey! Congratulations on poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 May 2018

Dear Akhtar, such a great poem....10++++

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Congrats for being chosen for the day.........

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Robert Murray Smith 05 May 2018

Akhtar, you have a lyrical quality in this beautiful poem. Did you intend that it should be sung? ++++10

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Akhtar Jawad 05 May 2018

I had no intentions of creating lyrical quality in this poem, if there is any, it has come naturally.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2020

Eve is more colorful, aromatic and delicate. Just to change the taste, I wish to be a honey bee. I am sure in love I can reproduce something sweeter than honey. variety is the only SPICE of LIFE apart from you know well sir

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 May 2019

Eve is more colorful, aromatic and delicate. Just to change the taste, I wish to be a honey bee. I am sure in love I can reproduce something sweeter than honey. C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S SIRrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr should be poem of the month

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 May 2019

Poem of the day. Too bad I come to know from these feedbacks. Congrats nevertheless for a lovely piece.

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Congratulations dear poet. Human ambition knows no bound. Best wishes for it's materialisation

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 May 2019

WOW; wonderful sweetest hope- If I am changed in a honey bee I shall come to you with a heart more catalytic, //// love the songs of hope on the chain of living life

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