I miss old Smoky and his hoss;
he's not been seen of late.
If he's now gone, it is our loss;
wish he'd ride through the gate.
Nice rhymes and perfect meter in your cute little poem. I miss Smoky, too. He's one of my best pals.
Thank you so much! I'm still riding, but have been slow on writing, I'll give it a go around again soon, thanks for the inspiration!
Dear Smoky, so glad you are back with us again. I was worried about you.
Thank you reminding us of "missing " poets on ph
Belle, this poem of yours, which I enjoyed, came up when I was checking up on Smoky, one of the few poets I follow in PH. I see he has posted since this poem of yours. I'm glad, and I guess you are too. -Glen
I enjoyed this for its clean rhyming and because I agree that PH cannot tolerate the loss of Cowboy---5 star agreement
Nor of Smoky, either, but Smoky is now back and Cowboy has ridden off into the sunset.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You're right, Belle. Smoky is missing in action lately. And Ron is right, too. Your little poem is very well done.