Shut Her Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Shut Her



Shut her

Life is no joke
No one can stake
Simply because he has infatuation
Life is cruel and severs connection

You are giving no time
To settle for future time
Permanent bond or relationship is serious thing
No one has control of happenings

If it exists on both the sides
One must decide
And take initiative
And put the thing in real perspective

We have seen many cases
That comes up in haste and breaks
Life turns into tragedy
And turns into dreamy project

The proposal has to match with seriousness
Else there will be no sense
The parents may think of not allowing her
To mingle with and shut her for moving further

Shut Her
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2017

Nice! Keep writing and responding to other posts. Jasneet Kaur, Nov 06,2017

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2017

Permanent bond or relationship is serious thing no one has control over it.. the perception carries depth.. your poem is very informative with a precise urge to the human society in general.. I liked your penultimate stanza most..a wonderful piece of work ..10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2017

Abhishek Kumar Shandilya Thank you so much Sir Hasmukh Mehta that you appreciated me the way. Like · Reply · 1 · 8 minutes ago Remove

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2017

welcome ashok kimar shandilya Like · Reply · 1 · A few seconds ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2017

The proposal has to match with seriousness Else there will be no sense The parents may think of not allowing her To mingle with and shut her for moving further

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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