Senryu - Thoughts Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


raced across my mind
some thundering thoughts of past
it is raining now~

Tuesday, October 19, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tihama Hykam 19 October 2021

Power of brain to store memory of past, Great imagery of rain presented in Senryu.

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Ricky Magnathen 02 November 2021

Free flow of memories.

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A senryu that flows along with the tears

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Suzon Albert 19 October 2021

Tears flowing is nicely represented by raining eyes. Fantastic Senryu.

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Juhaina Tumlu 19 October 2021

Full stars. I liked the comparison.

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Juhaina Tumlu 19 October 2021

Alone with thoughts is peaceful.

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