Senryu Stitch Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Stitch

Rating: 5.0


do not stitch my heart
by piercing thousand needles
kind words are enough

Wednesday, December 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 November 2018

oops. i meant [or mend]

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Bri Edwards 26 November 2018

kind words are not always easy to come by, but, then again, maybe easier than getting 1000 needles. OUCH! ! ! may i suggest another version? but perhaps your version is more DRAMATIC! ! ! ;) do not fix [or mend[ my heart with a thousand stitches; kind words are enough. to MyPoemList bri (:

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2018

Kind words! ! With humility. Peace and love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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