Senryu- Past Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

It is indeed an objective portrayal. If we could become that discerning and honest so as to retract follies while screening our memories. Very thoughtful and closer to life.

THE LEFT PAST FOOTPRINTS CARRY DOCUMENTS OF ERR PRESENT- RECTIFIER!

Yes very true words.

Wonderful senryu. Looking past will let us know what all we did.

Countless errors seen.....brilliant......thank u, dear friend....anjandev roy.

That shows wisdom Asimji

Past is always troublesome when you look from future.

we laugh and smile on our fast a very interesting three line poem by you on looking back at memories and trying to figure out what was done in a manner which would be changed now

Past is eventually series of mistakes.

Life's journey! ! Problems to overcome! Memories of the past. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.