Senryu - A Lighthouse Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - A Lighthouse

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emotion runs on
like moon passing through the clouds
caravan of life

melting of candles
selfless supreme sacrifice
a lesson to learn

an enduring lamp
cottage on the mountain hills
a lighthouse for soul

M. Asim Nehal
Thursday, November 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational,sacrifice,soul
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T Rajan Evol 01 November 2018

A complete scene and a complete story in 9 lines of 5-7-5 syllables, even limitation cannot stop creative thinking. Full 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

This is a beautiful Senryu on soul and emotion having touching expression with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.10

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Dave Walker 01 November 2018

A soul will be carried by the light. A great write.

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Muzahidul Reza 01 November 2018

Lighthouse. has been well done here, thanks for sharing

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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2018

We should all strive to be such a lighthouse.

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T Rajan Evol 01 November 2018

I will save it for further reading..

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