Senryu - 181 Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 181 Life

Rating: 5.0


vastness of the sky
wrapped indigo-blue muffler
around my thin neck

Tuesday, August 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 August 2016

Seeing the ways of the universe! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2016

I have never heard it put thusly. Marvelous, Mohammed. A 10

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M Asim Nehal 02 August 2016

Thanks much, Kelly.........Muffler is a wrap or scarf worn around the neck for warmth.

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M Asim Nehal 02 August 2016

Thanks much my friend.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 August 2016

Wowww. lovely piece. Beautifully put. Full marks to you.

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M Asim Nehal 02 August 2016

Thanks much NI......

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