Senryu 155 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu 155

Rating: 5.0


awaken and gone
leaving me alive, sweet dreams
the world is asleep

Wednesday, June 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 June 2016

There is something consoling in knowing the world is asleep - pains are eased, suffering paused, dreams revive. And in the first two lines you give us a little drama of one person's wish fulfillment, andmthenmit's back to the universe of sleep until the morning summons, Sleepers, awake!

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T Rajan Evol 17 June 2016

Wonderful, when world is asleep they keep you going.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 June 2016

Dreams of love and life! Thanks for sharing.

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