Revelation Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Revelation

Rating: 5.0


When you search silence
Inside your heart
But hear nothing but screams
That's when you know it all
Life is not two plus two
No simple Maths of addition
Or subtraction
But a weird geometric pattern
Or an absurd theorem
Still you love life
With all your might
For isn't it human to love
Complications?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is just for fun. Written on the spur of the moment just for the sake of writing something.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Louise Davies 18 December 2022

Well written Nosheen x Thanks for sharing x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 December 2022

Yes, we humans like to make it differcult

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

Your conclusion in this brilliant poem, dear Nosheen, is crystal clear. It IS human to love complications. Very right.5 Stars and to my Favourites. I always enjoy reading your poems.

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David Wood 18 December 2022

Life's complications, that paradox that some live that causes pain, confusion and sometimes hope as expressed in your excellent poem.

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Anjandev Roy 18 December 2022

Impeccable and perfect......thanks for sharing.....

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2023

In the spur of these moments is when we find a way among all this chaos. Brilliant poem Nosheen.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2022

People have defined life in various ways. Here I find one more wonderful definition of life... it's an absurd theorem... liked it.

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Beautiful, enigmatic as Nosheen's poems often are. Top score. Myfav

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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2022

Spur of the moment BRILLIANCE!

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Rob Lamberton 18 December 2022

I'm glad you took the time to pen this spur of the moment poem. Sometimes they are the best but so easily lost if not written in the moment!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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