Remembering My Pet Before Going To Bed.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Remembering My Pet Before Going To Bed....

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REMEMBERING MY PET, BEFORE GOING TO BED

Where are you going to, my Panter?
It is half past one midnight
come back soon, because you're black and it's night outside
black coloured too

if you don't come back soon
I can't find you in the dark
I worry your going outs
these last days
i'm busy here all the time
been half past 3, half past 4,5,
6....

the cat's special door
gives no sound
nothing comes out

oops! now become half past eight
my beloved is already awake
I told him

never happened like this,
she always returns home
at half past three
now it's already 9 o'clock
I don't think it is OK
Panter is still on her way
this is already Sunday morn

my heart feels saddest and torn

we've been searching for her everywhere
we searched and searched
searched all her favourite places
fifteen years of loyal traces

fifteen years of sorrow, glee
and loving care
if she does not come home,
one night, beware

the shared joys and sorrows
tonight she has not returned
no more tomorrows

hubby said comfortingly
most cats don't come home anymore
they then go quietly and peacefully
pausing in the elysium
to stay after that forever

fifteen loving years at home
now in the elysion-dome
not by accident
finally she made her best decision
to remain in the uplifting elysion....



©Sylvia Frances Chan
Saturday-Night 22 June 2019
23.14 hrs PM Dutch Time

Remembering My Pet Before Going To Bed....
Saturday, June 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: care,love,pet
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
fifteen loving years at home
now in the elysion-dome
not by accident
finally she made her best decision
to remain in the uplifting elysion....


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Saturday-Night 22 June 2019
23.14 hrs PM Dutch Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I have written a similar poem under the title: " Leaflets from my life- Gowri - My lovely puppy." Please do read it when you have the time. For remembering your pet, before going to bed.......a huge 10! Your pet cat Panter is safe and secure in Elysion Dome.

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I will read that as soonest as possible, Dr. Geeta. For " old" friends I make time, sure. I say " old" because I have seen your performance in the Netherlands, but I regretted that I have not shaken hands with you. But you ARE my friend, that must be said. Thank you for your huge 10!

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This is a poem that touches my heart. It is wonderful to have a pet. But when the pet goes missing or dies, it is heart breaking. I fully understand your emotion in this poem, Sylvia. " come back soon, because you're black and it's night outside black coloured too.

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Thank you for your valuable response in this poem. If I repeat the THANKS, then it is because this spot is so JUMPY. But I wish to leave some important reactions my side. I am not a one liner responder, sorry Dr. Geeta. But I do not like to give " half full response" . Like you always say Full Vote

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I am happy to read your fascinating comments in my poem, Dr. Geeta. Thank you so much Thank you for the full vote and your precious visit to my poem site. I always appreciate that highest.

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Jane Campion 22 June 2019

A wonderfully expressive poem. Thank you dear Sylvia.

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Thank you so much, Jane for your attentive response. A most valuable comment, Jane. You're most welcome.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 June 2019

REMEMBERING MY PET, BEFORE GOING TO BED Where are you going to, my Panter? It is half past one midnight come back soon, because you're black and it's night outside black coloured too.............

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