Reflection Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

Reflection

Rating: 5.0


lost in someone else’s dream
frolicking amidst madness
dangling by a dream and making
no sense of this commotion;

words of insanity
spewing forth like lava
bulldozing its way past
everything that came in the path;

how do I explain
what goes on inside
the deepest shadows
of my heart;

as the howling of the wind
and crashing of the thunder
drown out the sound of
a heart breaking
I sit down to watch my
reflection in the
puddle of tears;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 01 August 2009

Vanessa, the title is 'ANOTHER REFLECTION' thanks, Romeo

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Romeo Della Valle 01 August 2009

Dear Vanessa, you really let your feelings flow freely with this poem, great work, congratulation, keep it up, please, read my poem also titled 'REFLECTION' and let me know if you like it, thanks, you got from me a 10+

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