Precious Time Take Me 2 Poem by Okim Otu

Precious Time Take Me 2

Rating: 5.0


precious time take me
take me to whence mother's arm
keep me kindly warmth

whence dreaming was fun
and castle cost less to build
since it was on beach's sand

take me to nearby bush
where the stream is comforting
keeping us cool through heated noon

take me to chilly night
when cheerful voices sang
melodies under delightful moon

whence the harmattan cool
forced kids to the burning fire
prompting stories that shaped minds

precious time take me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A reminiscing of my childhood. To have grown up in a remote village in Nigeria, is one of the best things that have happened to me. I wasn't only taught to be cultured, I was most importantly taught to be a human being. To us civilization means knowing how to live such that those after you will also live.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fatemeh zolfagharian 27 August 2022

Lovely poem okim.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 August 2022

You are writing so well. Express freely. Keep it up.

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Okim Otu 24 August 2022

Thank you sir.

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