Preciosa Poem by ana orozco
Preciosa
Preciosa, why do you cry?
Are you sick or are you lonely?
Whenever you’re alone
Do you think?
'Won’t anyone hold me? '
Was your heart broken and shattered,
Was it left out in the cold?
Is that why everyday,
You wish for someone to hold?
Do you lose yourself in your dreams,
Slowly losing grip on reality
Not caring of this world,
Slowly losing your sanity.
Being carried away by wave of emotion,
Drowning in a pool of disparity
Longing for love in the deepest cave,
But what you really need is clarity.
Preciosa don't cry
Don’t waste your life away,
Your heart soon will heal,
It just won't be today.....
beautiful attempt of capturing emotions yet, being low on GK plz tell whats Preciosa?
Ana, this is a really good piece of writing. You seem to have a flare for alliteration and know how and where to use it. This poem has a great beat to it and the second stanza is a real imaginative piece of writing. Admittedly I did not like the lines: 'Not caring of this world, Slowly losing your sanity' They seem a bit awkwards to me and they seem to take aay the sort of romanticism of the rest of the poem, but reading it without those line it still maintains great flow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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btw preciosa means precious. :) srry i took so long... about a years time.... lol