Half of my life, I lived in my head,
In shades of grey, white and red,
Talked all to myself, all day, every day,
Fiddling in the mutiny of rights and wrongs,
Midst the chaos of unsaid words,
A thought, just ruminates on and off,
That one day for sure,
I would talk my mind out,
And heads would lend me an ear,
That listens and not merely hear,
All those profound thoughts,
That brewed up all day, each day.
I time travel, back and forth,
At the will of my wish,
In the split of a second,
In the dark of the night,
Or in the glare of bright light,
To erase the past, to correct a story,
Clear the fights of unripe selves,
To meet those I did never greet,
Share the thoughts that I never told,
To show up the murky face to some,
Those to whom I have always smiled or waved.
The unclear fears, the unshared love,
To let few know that I did care,
My heart did long them more and more
We veil our feelings all day, every day,
May be we were taught to be so,
Or we fear a long sour scene,
We express less, we say nothing more,
Live the picture perfect life galore,
But we live our life just in our heads,
And parch in the pitch of a hoaxed life.
This is a beautiful poem on life having thrilling expression with groovy collocation. I appreciate this poem. Thank u dear Ashika for sharing such a brilliant poem. Full vote.
But we live our life just in our heads, And parch in the pitch of a hoaxed life.. the heart has its reasons which the head may not understand, , , , , , , , , a fine poem on life and a bit philosophical..... thank you dear poetess. tony
Great write on the vagaries of life. And the demands it make on our emotions. Strongly and powerfully expressed
" what is poetry? " - this beautiful piece is poetry: a spontaneous overflow of poewerful feelings. perfect pictures; powerful imagery!
Half of my life, I lived in my head, In shades of grey, white and red, Talked all to myself, all day, every day, Fiddling in the mutiny of rights and wrongs, ....fascinating expression! Your unexpressed words are so beautifully articulated in this elegant poem! (10)
Poignant rendition of words written with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Ashika and do remain enriched.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The unclear fears, the unshared love, To let few know that I did care, My heart did long them more and more Beautiful poem dear.. the lines finger the strings of heart. And it's so thought provoking. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++