Peaceful Sleep Of A Thief Poem by ONElia AVElar

sleep-thief, peace -relief, piece by piece-fragments whole heart-pieces-ful, collecting fragments-taking heart piece by piece, nice comparisions and equally wonderful contrasts a poetic expression of eternal juxtapositions,

I love the way you play with words without losing the overall sense of the poem. Beautiful and delicate. F

so interesting....thanks for sharing

clever alliterative echoes and a catchy rhythm – peace/piece crossover is neatly executed without being trite; winsomely beautiful, a peaceful piece of poetic enchantment... Rgds, Ivan

This first line of the poem 'How peaceful is your sleep, my thief.' is wonderful! Not only the first line, the lines of the whole poem are consistant with the pivotal idea. A small and beautiful poem to get 10 and I did that.

you really are a beautiful writer....every poem is different, yet all hit with great emotional weight..excellent

Even Onelia's titles are poetry.... rx

love seems to be of total completeness unveiling the love by the heart, well penned,10/10, thanks forsharing