Passing Through Thicks And Thins Of Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Passing Through Thicks And Thins Of Life

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Torn socks, worn and frayed,
on weary feet they stayed
sweated shirt, stained and smelly,
the struggle is real, it's not a deli.

Thick blood, flowing from a wound,
a symbol of strength, never subdued
human struggle, a constant fight,
but we keep pushing with all our might.

Sunday, February 25, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: human life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juhaina Tumlu 25 February 2024

Yes thru thick and thins of life.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2024

Thicks and thins Of Life....the title of the poem solicited me to go through this poem. Your expression..'Thick blood, flowing from a wound, a symbol of strength, never subdued' is the whole substance of this poem....Appreciated.

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Anjandev Roy 25 February 2024

This is wonderfully brilliant and perfect.... thank u.... friend...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 February 2024

Wonderful piece Asim ThankU

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Koffi B Sossou 25 February 2024

The fight is daily for a bright future. Never shall we give up. Nice poem.

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Bri Edwards 26 February 2024

'blood flowing' may be a symbol of 'strength' to someone, sometimes, but it sounds a bit odd to me. And life may be a 'struggle' at times, but not equally for all people. Come on, 'God', be fair. : ( bri

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Bri Edwards 26 February 2024

I would say 'sweaty shirt'. I sometimes wear a 'sweat shirt' or 'sweat pants' to bed at night, and at other times. I like '.....smelly, the struggle is real, it's not a deli...' though it's meaning is questionable. ;))) bri

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Bri Edwards 26 February 2024

(cont.) But I have heard the expression/phrase 'through thick and thin': To stay with someone or something "through thick and thin" is to persevere through good times as well as bad: "She stood beside her friend through thick and thin."

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Bri Edwards 26 February 2024

Asim, I don't recall ever hearing 'thicks' or 'thins' used as English words. Well, there used to be a tasty cracker with the name 'Wheat Thins', yum. (cont.)

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Nabakishore Dash 25 February 2024

Keep pushing with all our might is the best lesson out of this brilliantly written poem.

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