Our Forever Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Our Forever

Rating: 5.0


It is the evening of our special day
...The sunlight is fading in the west
Soon ebony blankets and their velvet
.....Shall shimmer-glimmer-in galaxy's fest;


And you and i are together - -
...In every conceivable way
Leaving nothing to other's imagination's
.....Ever lasting love - here to stay;


Laying upon a meadow green - we are
...Star gazing and counting the years- -
So many decades together, darling
.....Counting the joys & smiles-the sorrows-the tears;



Theodora Onken

7/27/17

Thursday, July 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: forever,love,romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Our love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 03 August 2017

Lucky those who can count together, In life's good and bad weather. So beautiful and well said, That we can feel and see, How wonderful a life together can be. This is such a flowing, lovely poem. Thank you

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Theodora Onken 06 August 2017

Thank you so very much Sandra. Your reviews are always appreciated by me - Most especially because you take the time to review our words in rhyme! ! ! ! Blessings! ! ! !

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Rini Shibu 27 July 2017

Wow beautiful poem on love and romance

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