Odysseus/Orpheus Poem by Daniel Brick

Odysseus/Orpheus



What should I do
with these random moments
left over from larger events?
moments that were not swallowed
whole by the movement of things
but rather cast carelessly
along their margins,
where they languish,
unless rescued and given
a new raison d'etre.

Metaphors abound that aid us
when we must be in disguise:
it's not the fault of things
that we are tossed about,
just like those lost moments,
because we cannot find a place
of rest, or an avenue of escape,
but must strengthen our resolve
to bear the pain of the moment,
and find a new raison d'etre.

That moment past, our composure
restored, our nerves steadied,
let us sift through available
metaphors and select one or two
to test against this intrusion
of reality into our world of
accidents, disguises and fantasies
- all masquerading as strange
successes - for the moment. Shakespeare
told us, The preparedness is all.

I have chosen either Odysseus
or Orpheus as my central metaphor.
Whichever one I finally choose
will be my face to the world,
and will ever slowly at first,
gradually become rooted in my being,
and that is called IDENTITY...
It means a curtain of new reality
has been lowered, and will not be raised
again, and so choice will become fate.

Some people, mostly strangers, call me
Odysseus. They expect a convincing display
of strength and a persuasive token
of my kingship. I forgot Kings must be
generous, wastefully generous. To one
and all. And those who thrive
on desire ask incessantly, Odysseus,
will you take me on your next voyage?
I have been long prepared for this. Out there
are wealth and success that belong to me!

Others see me as Orpheus, and rejoice
with an equal fervor because I overcame
the despair of the Hades Realm, and returned
to daylight reality full of hopes. They assume
I can teach them how to outsmart the Dark Lords
and survive. And those who thrive
on desire ask incessantly, Orpheus,
will you take me on your next descent?
I am ready for this exploit. Down there
are wealth and success that belong to me!

Tuesday, May 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: identity,mythology,adventure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 24 May 2016

A vast world your enriched world of the mythological metaphorical scepsis!

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Amitava Sur 20 May 2016

Hi- Daniel after a long time I'm appearing here in PH again and read this marvelous penning of yours with lots of doubts, questions and propositions. In my raw and blunt headed view I prefer Orpheus way above than Shakespeare's preparedness, because I feel our logic, what we follow is time bound, what is believable today to me, tomorrow it may change also. But Orpheus waits and waits only til the expectation is fulfilled... which is acceptable to me. Thank you for such a thoughtful write. I have also given some few poems, expect your valued comment to enrich me.

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Liza Sudina 12 May 2016

You are a king. That's what you think you are, your self identity. And then you invite with you, so you are a generous king. I'm proud to talk and get letters from a king. King Daniel.

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