Ocean
lashing the rocks
sculpting my savage coast
where vagrant seagulls loiter and perch …
Earth submits to you as a grain of sand,
and to your motion I cast
the cadence of my thoughts.
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Magnifique! You have captured the essence of the ocean with great imagery but above all this magnificent poem conveys the feeling, grandeur and mystery that the sea provokes. Now, thanks to you I can see and feel the sea again.and join the vagrant seagulls there. A true pearl of a poem, to be cherished
a very nice potrayal of the ocean and the rocks and seagulls, water lashing the rocks. a great job. thank you
You presented vast ocean on your palm so lucidly, I am mystified. Great!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very fine, I like it, thanks.