No Love Poem Poem by Nosheen Irfan

No Love Poem

Rating: 4.9

Words refuse to configure themselves
Structures lack a solid foundation
That's how designs have shaped
No cognitive plot lies at the base

Can I write a Love Poem for you?

But the moon is deep in thoughts
The sky is a wide mass of absence
The trees don't reply to the gusts
Silence spreads outside its habitat.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Craddock 22 September 2023

p1love refuses to take form, refuses to configure into appealing shapes, refuses to take composing elements, transcending shape shifting into heart yearning love, no design foundation coherent can weave, poles apart thoughts minds hearts lives into lovers,

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Terence Craddock 25 September 2023

I wrote the poems 'A Place Where Love Will Not Dwell', 'Cold Stone Hearts Cannot Love Burn', 'Moon Sentences Stone Cold Silences', 'A Landscape Love Discards' and 'Love Refuses', inspired by the poem 'No Love Poem', by the poet Nosheen Irfan and dedicated to the poet Nosheen Irfan.

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Terence Craddock 22 September 2023

p2no poem pattern romantic passionate can rhyme, sing love throughout enduring time for two souls, lacking spark igniting fuels can never flame stone hearts cannot love burn, the moon shines no mystery illuminous love light, the sky a starless veil spans

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Terence Craddock 22 September 2023

p3all horizons broods in void abstinence, trees leafless stand in naked indifference to winter wind gusts, wind gusts stir spread desolation silences, in a landscape love discards refuses to habitat

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 September 2023

Wow! ! It is so beautiful. Great ink. Thanks.

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Kingsley Egbukole 30 September 2023

A beautiful poem. The lines of poem flow naturally to give beautiful poems, 'but when the moon is deep in thoughts The sky is a wide mass of absences' the lines becomes difficult to rhyme. s

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Kingsley Egbukole 30 September 2023

Beautiful and well scripted poem.

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Anjandev Roy 30 September 2023

Just superb piece...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 September 2023

A wonderful poem. Loved it. Top score!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 September 2023

Noshy Brilliant poem TFS and Bravo! ! ! ! ! Encore!

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Lahore, Pakistan
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