My Spiritual Journey Poem by M. Asim Nehal

My Spiritual Journey

Rating: 4.9


For the countless days
I stood in the meadow
To see the vastness of the field
My sight returned to me with a smile

For the countless nights
I stood under the vast sky
To see the stars and galaxies
My sight returned with a glowing light.

For countless days and nights
I passed through jungles and mountains
Deserts and Seas,
My plight returned to me in peace.

I visited countless village and cities
Homes and markets
Alas, I found humans fighting
Restless and struggling for peace.

Sunday, September 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Life's journey! ! Hustle and bustle along the line! A smile much needed to overcome the odds! ! ! ! Able to uplift your spirit. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Zuzu Mutairi 19 September 2020

Such a soothing poem with the unusual ending of reality. For countless days and nights I passed through jungles and mountains Deserts and Seas, My plight returned to me in peace.

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Valsa George 17 September 2020

Alas, I found humans fighting Restless and struggling for peace. This is what we see around us these days! Amid all our joy, such unhappy scenes keep haunting us! A slice of contemporary life starkly presented!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2020

For countless days and nights I passed through jungles and mountains Deserts and Seas, My plight returned to me in peace.......much impressive with feeling of peace. A spiritual lige ever feels peace out of plight. Marvelous work.5 from 5 in new system five stars.

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Anjandev Roy 13 September 2020

Restless and struggling for peace......magnificent write.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 13 September 2020

Alas I found humans fighting Restlessness and struggling for peace...good words. An enlightening poetry. Thank-you.

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