My Lovely Family Poem by muthu veerappan

My Lovely Family

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Can there be anything better in this world? ? ?
the only world, i know, is my family..

my parents and cute sisters can never have substitutes..
as it is hard to show the same affection..

they have seen all my ups and downs..
and they expect me to be, up, always..

my mom's health tips make her a doctor..
i have no fee to pay but only laughter..

an atmosphere which gives me peace..
we cut into five, even if it is a bread piece..

small fights happen and i shed a tear..
no loss, as they finally call me, my dear..

though they put around me, a fence..
being within, is not that much an offence..

hope these smiles last, not only for a while..
but for a mile, then, it is worth living......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

moving and well done... Krista

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rago rago 15 August 2009

love affection and the fragrance always spread sprout and be joyful for ever.........

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Bob Blackwell 12 August 2009

The worth of a happy family is unmeasureable, and you have written I fine tribute to yours. Well done.

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Anu Pama 07 April 2009

love this......poem.....nice to pen abt family.....

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Pink Butterfly ... 19 February 2009

So nice of you to made a poem about your family. Fantastic and lovely!

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Chitra - 06 February 2009

a wonderful tribute to the source of our strength the force that keeps us going

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